Dont Tell Devin - Comments

I LOVE IT
Kinda think it needed more details, spaced a bit more, you know?
USE SPELL CHECK NICOLE
YOU FAIL AT SPELLING!
Some words I couldn't even begin to figure out what they were supposed to be!
D:<
-grammar natzi-
AWESOME PLOT
AWESOME CHARACTERS
AWESOMENESS!
Good couple!
I loveded it

"I had plans for this but once school started back (yes this has been prewritten for THAT long) I just couldn't do it. I see these people everyday.
How awkward is that??
Answer: VERY."
^ That bit of the authors note made me laugh so hard that my mom came downstairs to see if I was alright. Yeah... funny stuff.
Anyways, I loved the story. It was amazing. There was a few spelling/typo error, but nothing serious. All in all though, Great story.
and major kudos for writing about people you actually know, I don't think I could ever do that. lol

Awww, it was so amazing! I really wish there was more :( Great story though, it really made me laugh

Awww, I absolutely love this. And the title :) I don't want it to end!

I like that devin remembered the kiss. :)

update...now!.....plz?

^that was actually from me[kaylaolivialloyd.] but im on my friends account so..sorryyyyy .(: looove youu ♥

yes; yes i will comment. and tell you how pissed off i am that i have to wait for an update..it makes me want to cry..
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...oh but great job with the story though(: ♥♥♥

Awesome chapter. :) I really love this. What?! Just two more chapters?!

I like the new update. Can't wait for th nxt two :)

okay so i started reading this right...loving it btw and i go to the characters and see your picture in it and i start freaking out like..OHMIGOSH! thats nicole..then i look at the author...and its you :/ i felt so dumb (: ♥

:) I really like this story. It's super cute and very real and different. :)

Ugh you are leaving me hanging with the new update. It's cool though it means you are a good author and you know how to keep your readers coming back. :)

Great story! Can't wait to read the rest of it! :)

I'll comment! But only because I love this Tiffany chick. Where on earth did you get the idea for her?

no. you are not getting better at this updating thing.

yes nicole u are a horrible updater

Well I hope you die too! What did I ever do to you!? ya know, besides give you a fat lip for your first school picture, bleach stain your shirt, embarrass you, ect, ect.

That's my title!!!! I feel so loved.
Will you laugh at me if I tell you that I just learned what TC meant while reading the authors notes? Yeah, you probably will. But that's okay becasue I can make fun of you about everything else (like your crappy story comments!) and then persuade you to update.
Don't be a me! Don't take 10 months to update!

omg ok where are you......im dieing here where is the rest of the story