Dont Tell Devin - Comments

somehow this went all deactivate on my subscriptions so I'm like "SHRAP!" and now I'm going to leave this comment just to let you know that I l0ve your story(no shrap(I can't say Shit and Crap is too clean))and you should right more (so while I was typing a bottle landed on the key board and it typed jk so it would have read" I love your story jk" but I decided against leaving it there)(I seriously thought about it)

oooo...Marilyn Manson i wonder what got yu into tht =)
hehe still...awesome cant wait til the "googly eyes" lol
ooo btw why didnt i read the last 2 chaps in the notebook?

ok so I LOVE IT!!!! UGH !!! i want more rite now!!!!!! its just funny cuz when jeremy 1st moved here i thought he was gay lol and this story is so funnnyyyy lol!!!!!!!!!!

googly eyes, Tiff? Thts...diff...and yur not a faghag cuz gatlin doesnt even kno hes gay! So he dnt count hehe (:
Anyways, i miss 2nd period!
So...didnt jeremy hav "broad dog" yu gotta put him in the story lol

A sluty whore and nothing more. And i would like to point out that I was tottaly a fag-hag before you. And my coffee is way more valubal(sp) than Frosted flakes. So, random thought, but is Devin's locker close to Jermys? So, ya know, they can make googly-eyes in the hallway.

So I'm listening to Stan (by eminem, eminen, emininn, M&M) and then I started to think "What if one of them killed themselves." But then I'm like "Na, Nicole likes happy endings" I mean face it, this story will probably end up with Devin shitingy out magical rainbows with a purple lepercon(?) because he had some great gay sex.

I know what happend next! So you should hurry up and post so I won't be posesed to tell your readers and they wont be pissed.
By the way.....crap, I forgot my orignal comment

Hey babe! I love it. Very detailed. I read it in the car on the way to your house and I must say, Shane is a very bad driver. He almost wrecked. Twice.

Hey babe! I love it. Very detailed. I read it in the car on the way to your house and I must say, Shane is a very bad driver.