Something New - Comments

Your tale is quite adorable to be honest. I read it in one sitting and I must say "AAAAAAWWWWWW" You have a point about boys being stupid and indecisive. Many have personal issues to deal with. Im glad that the happy duo are finally together and SUX for Ava! GAY LOVE! WHOO HOOO! Update soon please. Im addicted to this like a monkey is addicted to delicious, juicy bananas or flinging poo. >D

MOARRRRRR.

:D?

xoxocat.

INSTANT SUBSCRIBE<3 Roux and Shane, as characters and a couple, are amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter!<3

Silent reader here
I'm finally commenting
I really love this story
:D

ohmygod i fucking love you your amazing your just so amazing you have no idea this story makes me all giddy and happy its not even funny this is story is just to adorable i love love love shane and roux i havent red a story thats made me this giddy in a long time keep up the great work!!!!!!

ahh i just finished reading this! the first chapter im all 'well they're gonna end up together' then the second chapter im like 'wait. i think they're already seeing each other' then i was all 'yeah i knew all along' lol
great story! i cant wait for the rest
update soon♥

UPDATEEE:D

I love this omg!!! So amazing shane finely grew a pair lolz update soon plzzzzz

loved it they are finally dating!!!!!!! and i hope your mom is feeling better update soon =)) amazing job btw =))

So adorable <3 Please keep going quicker. I started this yesterday and I just flew threw it this morning! VERY ADORABLE

Subscribed! I just completly fell in love with this story, and when I realized that I had read all youve got posted so far I was so upset!! It is so good and I cannot wait until you update it again! (:

I love these characters so much xD

Good chapte :) Update soon, yeah?
<3

I totally forgot about this story! Yay update and its super dooper cute! :)

i only normally read fanfiction, but i will definitely be reading this from now on too :)

Their togetherness is so freaking sweet I can't even handle it x)

GOD THIS STORY IS SO GOOD.
Seriously my favorite story on mibba.
I love it so much.
MOREEE.
<333

xoxocat.

Me gusta.
I want s'mores now! D:

-kayt

I could hear Shane grown, even though it seemed like her crush had.. It should be 'groan' not 'grown'

as Shane laid down beside me and pulled he into his chest. 'pulled me' not 'pulled he'

I looked up and him with 'at him' not 'and him'

but I couldn’t deny that I was enjoying it way to much. 'To' should be 'too'

Its honestly the best date that I’ve ever been on. There Its should be It's for 'it is'.

that this is a date even if neither of has actually said it was. 'neither of us have' not 'neither of has.'

Sorry for all of the errors :((. I just went mistake happy. And the fact that your mom's knee is bad, makes me feel worse :((. I hope that she is alright!

Beautiful chapter and I am so fucking happy that they are now boyfriends! It took them awhile but I am just glad that they finally got there :DD <3333

I like Dustin. He laughs at everything and falls down a lot. I like it.
And I'm jealous because I've been craving s'mores forever and still haven't gotten any. :/
But I was really excited when this updated. :DD It's one of my favorites.
Also I'm about to check out your new story. :)
xox