Take My Hand and Have a Little Faith - Comments

  • dirtylittlesecret

    dirtylittlesecret (100)

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    Thank you :) I'm glad your liked it!
    December 7th, 2010 at 06:00am
  • Loor

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    This is adorable! It’s short, to the point and very sweet. You have a great way to describe the girl’s feelings.

    I adore the fact that it is about Alex DeLeon, because this boy deserves some love! I smiled so hard when I read the voicemail part. I can totally imagine Alex’s voicemail being something like that.

    Oh, and just a small hint: you might want to separate the paragraphs with a white rule. That’s how stories have to be posted on Mibba. I didn’t know it myself until recently, but a lot of people mentioned it to me, so I figured I should mention it to you as well.
    November 25th, 2010 at 06:21pm