This is adorable! It’s short, to the point and very sweet. You have a great way to describe the girl’s feelings.
I adore the fact that it is about Alex DeLeon, because this boy deserves some love! I smiled so hard when I read the voicemail part. I can totally imagine Alex’s voicemail being something like that.
Oh, and just a small hint: you might want to separate the paragraphs with a white rule. That’s how stories have to be posted on Mibba. I didn’t know it myself until recently, but a lot of people mentioned it to me, so I figured I should mention it to you as well.
November 25th, 2010 at 06:21pm
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