Hello there! I don’t watch Glee so there’s a chance that my lack of experience detracted from your writing a little, but either way it was very well written. You related her emotions to the song and her relationships really well, and being able to recognize connections is an important thing in writing. So good job on that. It flowed in a thought pattern, too; I don’t know if you understand what I mean there, but I guess I’m trying to say that the organization made it seem natural. That’s also a great quality in writing, since writers should be able to put their thoughts on paper as effectively as possible. Good job there, too.
I also have some suggestions for you that I PMed you… I’m really good at taking a long time to explain simple things, so I didn’t want to crowd up you comment section with the first comment. :)
So thanks for entering my contest and congratulations on doing so well! Great job. :)
I also have some suggestions for you that I PMed you… I’m really good at taking a long time to explain simple things, so I didn’t want to crowd up you comment section with the first comment. :)
So thanks for entering my contest and congratulations on doing so well! Great job. :)