Born - Comments

I like this. It's different. I like the line you threw in there about a madman.
The way Charlotte is with her sketchbook is the way I am with writing. I have to have something to write on. All the time. xD
I lock myself in my room for hours and write.

I really hope you update this sometime, because I would love to see where it goes.
BTW - the layout is beautiful <3

My favorite part was the end. I loved the MarioKart thing, haha. If I was her sister, I would have started laughing when she made the screeching noises for effect. Really, I would have. (:

This was really cute. :3
I like Charlotte's character. Obsessive. She prefers to be alone. And she talks to her stuffed animal.
And I also liked the layout and your writing. <3

I'm subscribing! (:

Out of all the stories you've written, this is probably my favorite. The character Charlotte is engaging, and I liked to read the dialogue in the first chapter, 'cuz it's funny.

Heh. "It's worse than that MarioKart phase you went through!"
"You have to admit I have mad skills."

Kelly, you are a genius. Please keep going with this story. It's so cool. Love Like Cyanide is good, too.

Oiy, Charlotte totally reminded me of my best friend which is kind of scary.
>.< I just...yes, don't even know what to say without sounding like a moron.
So I'm going to stop here.

I loved this.
Charlotte seemed like a real person which I really like. I love characters that people can relate to in some way or another.
I think I like Maddie the most though. She's so mature and lovely :D
The plot seems very unique and interesting. It almost has a Chronicles of Narina feel to it, with the war that is starting to destroy her.
I'm excited to see where this goes!
Good job (:

Oh wow. This was so utterly amazing.

I have felt this kind of pull in my favorite stories. This is the kind of unique story that really makes me love mibba. There are so many amazing writers!

Charlotte is really very interesting to me, because I think her character is the most real, and defined.

Good job.

"You're obsessed."

I stood up and leaned over the table. I could feel a grin slide into place on my face as I looked down at her. "So maybe I am."

Best. Line. Ever

This looks pretty good so far.
You write really well and I find this interesting.
I can't wait to read more. :3
Well done.

Holy crap, I love this!

This was really good. <3
Charlotte is an interesting character. :D
She's very real feeling. :)
Good job!

It's awesome! Charlotte and Madeline remind me a lot of myself and Gracie. xD

I think you rushed through typing it though; there are a couple random numbers in some of your words.