i'm pretty sure you deserted me like, two hours ago because it's two o'clock, but i love you. and this needs more drama, so quit being such a nerd with your studying and come write for me. i love you. chapter's still good, i love your suspense, bbg.
Thank you, I think. I'm trying to keep this story pushing itself if that makes any sense. I'm not quite sure where to go when this story is done. I want to post some of my other stuff. I don't know how well it will go over. But definitely thanks for waiting patiently.
Always with the cliffhangers! I'm not quite sure, but I think your writing style has this sense of "now" where everything is happening in this moment, and you don't detract from that with too much detail or useless dialogue. At the end of the last two chapters there has been a sense of anxiety! What is going on next? This is definitely a dynamic point in the story, but my oh my I'm definitely buying into what you're writing. I hope you are able to update soon, although I'll eagerly read whenever you get around to posting. Nice work :)