You Shine Brighter Than Anyone - Comments

I've read this before - as you can tell, I commented on it - and I loved every single moment of it. Tyler is such an ass-wipe. Ugh. I wanna smack him xD Anyways, I love that anyone who's been through a breakup can relate to this to either a major or a minor extent. You don't see many heartbreak stories that are written this well. I really enjoyed this (:
Lovely job! <3

Hee, I've already read two chapters of this, and I'm going to continue now! As I said before, this is amazing, and I love all the characters. Delilah's mom really made me giggle in the beginning, haha. She didn't even care that she was sort of being a bitch; she just wanted her daughter to get out of the 'goddamn bed.'

Me likesss. (:

This was so sweet and beautiful. I love how you wrote this and I could relate to the character's a lot.
This felt realistic and was stunningly thought out, I wasn't expecting them to break up, it was a nice change to some of the other stories on here.
I could feel her emotions so well throughout this, it was brilliantly portrayed. :)

Omfg, this is so adorable! :D It kept my attention from the very, very beginning to the last word - but the ending made me so sad D:! I mean, WUT?! YOU JERKFACE, YOU ENDED IT! I also love the Romeo and Juliet type of feel to this story. This was so cute, though!
Amazing job <3

Awe.
I freaking loved this. <3
The layout, the way you write, just everything is great.

Cute story.
Very interesting :)
But, I did find somethings like this:
She'd been having them ever since she and Tyler Mathis Broke up..
Some of the words in this story have capalized words that don't need to start with Capitals.
That's all really :) Other than that, you did a great job!

This is such a cute story :D
Sweet and simple :)
I was actually expecting the break up though, nothing really gave it away but I kinda figured. It would've been nice to know a bit more about Tyler but, then again keeping his personality a bit secluded might be best for a story like this. I really loved it though, keep it up :D

Stories like these are sweet and I like them a lot. I'm contemplating writing a love story myself, however I need to find a plot that's not too hollywood. This one seems pretty sweet though, well done ;]

Now: I think it would have been good if you told us a bit more about the relationship Delilah had with her previous boyfriend. More information and more time spent with the characters would make them a lot easier to relate to. Since you didn't introduce Noah before the second chapter, you could have used a lot more time on describing how Delilah was coping with the break up. You did write that she threw away all of his stuff and that she couldn't stop herself loving him, and you also included that she had been depressed and that her mother and friend started to worry about her. From this we do understand that she has been out of it for a while, but if you had written more about this it would have been even better.

Keep it up, good luck! :]

Woah, that was amazing!
I really love it and the way you write is really good and makes me want to read more the whole time.
It seemed really cute and I love it, well done (:

This is pretty interesting from what I've read so far (two chapters). But I think I'm going to keep reading... As said before, it doesn't seem to cliché and it's actually pretty sweet! Your writing style is amazing. (:

I've read chapter one before, so I read it again and chapter two.
It is a love story, but it's realistic enough that it's not too cliché. That's good, I find it hard to get the balance right in love stories. :]

The picture in your layout isn't showing because it's been taken off of the hosting site, by the way.

This is... A bit different to most of the romance stories I've heard. Plot twists in chapter one are always good! I'm curious to keep reading. *Subs*

:DD! I loved it.

I really love the mart on how her and Noah met :D Sounds like something I've done to my friends.

Meh, don't like Tyler much. xD
Great story

This is adorable so far :]
It was a bit rushed at first, but still great :]

'Ello, I'm march on and I'm incredibly jealous of your writing.
I love this part especially:

"But, if this guy is worth your time, no matter how boob-loving he may be, he'll look past the hoes on the beach."

"If only this mythological guy who doesn't care about boobs were real," sighed Delilah.

"You know, I'm starting to think we're overdoing it a bit on the sarcasm."

This is so cute. <3
I love Noah and we haven't learned much about him yet.
I really can't wait to see where this goes!

Awh, I really got into it and then he ends it?
I guess the whole "Romeo and Juliet" thing should've given it away. :/
Good story! <3

n'awh! :D
This chapter was so cute, but short. :[
Update soon. :]

Tyler's an ass-wipe. :P

I think this story is adorable! :D
&& What Penny did to Dehlia is totally something one of my friends would do to me, call over a hot guy then like run away after telling them that I think their hot. -_-
I love this story though, I'm subscribing.