oo. They're the same person? Okay. I thought it was just like, coincedence that they had the same name or something. Sorry. Wow, lots of nicknames she has, yea?
This plot is like, really really awesome. I love it. Although at the end of the last chapter, I think that its supposed to be in Beth's POV, but it still says Liza's POV from the flashback. You never changed it back, unless its supposed to be like that.
I love it!!!! I just wish there was more.... like more chapters. I could really see this going somewhere....I think.... Like..maybe you could have the second chapter as a flashback and the third chapter as someone saving her (you said the scissors were dull) and then she could find love!!! True love, not the used love!!! That would be a totally awesome story!!
but it's your story...you can do what you want with it...