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  • GiveMeTherapy

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    this is kinda sad, but in a good way :] i really like it! update soon!
    March 3rd, 2008 at 01:00am
  • MusicSavedMyLife

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    I think...that you should update...

    please??
    February 6th, 2008 at 11:32pm
  • MusicSavedMyLife

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    hah. I'm sorry. I'm a little slow today...
    thank you though.
    December 26th, 2007 at 08:55am
  • Unapologetic Apathy

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    hehe, that's my fault.. I always make up names that have a ton of nicknames...
    December 26th, 2007 at 02:41am
  • liz rad

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    I'll try to keep it down to just the Beth(y) and Liza. :) Sorry for the confusion.
    December 25th, 2007 at 10:57pm
  • MusicSavedMyLife

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    oo. They're the same person?
    Okay. I thought it was just like, coincedence that they had the same name or something. Sorry.
    Wow, lots of nicknames she has, yea?
    December 25th, 2007 at 10:36pm
  • liz rad

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    Beth is Liza. Her Name is Elizabeth. So yea, nickname's and what not. I'll go make it say that it's her POV though.
    December 25th, 2007 at 09:43am
  • MusicSavedMyLife

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    YES! ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! YAY YAY YAY!!!!

    This plot is like, really really awesome. I love it. Although at the end of the last chapter, I think that its supposed to be in Beth's POV, but it still says Liza's POV from the flashback. You never changed it back, unless its supposed to be like that.

    I love this story!
    December 25th, 2007 at 09:09am
  • Unapologetic Apathy

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    You are amazing, dear. That's all I am saying!
    December 24th, 2007 at 12:59am
  • MusicSavedMyLife

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    yesh!!
    haha, YAY YOU!!!
    Me happy for you.
    =]

    Is it Matt? I think that's who it is. Because you said that he's the one that calls her Bethy. Anywho. Its very great so far!!!!!
    December 23rd, 2007 at 11:55am
  • Unapologetic Apathy

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    Hehe!! We are both Ink Slingers!! Finally!!!!! WHOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

    We are working on the next couple of chappie's right now, Kay-chan!!! I hope you enjoy!!!!!
    December 23rd, 2007 at 03:03am
  • MusicSavedMyLife

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    hehe,
    I love it so far, and I agree with her^^^^ wish.

    I wish there were more chapters
    =]
    December 23rd, 2007 at 12:45am
  • Unapologetic Apathy

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    Comment virginity!!!!

    I love it!!!! I just wish there was more.... like more chapters. I could really see this going somewhere....I think.... Like..maybe you could have the second chapter as a flashback and the third chapter as someone saving her (you said the scissors were dull) and then she could find love!!! True love, not the used love!!! That would be a totally awesome story!!

    but it's your story...you can do what you want with it...
    December 21st, 2007 at 05:34pm