Move On - Comments

Wow.
I think I'm going to read and comment on every single one of your stories today! :D
Haha.
You're a fantastic writer!
And this story is wonderful so far! Please, please continue?

Mia I have never read any of your stuff and today I decided "what the hay? Let me read her work." and to say that I loved how you started this is an understatement. I loved how you introduced the boy, letting us know that he wasn't fully there in the world. Josephine seems like a very simple girl with a very simple life and it's intriguing.

There were a few grammatical and tense errors, but nothing to drastic. Just read over it and fix them, but you should most definitely continue. I subscribed

Go one with it.
Sounds interesting

Josephine leds quite a simple life, doesn't she?
Also, I love how he appeared but then vanished just as quick.

I really love this, I know it's been forever since you started to post by the looks of the comments but, you should continue this. Really.

Yes, you should! *subscribes* and I would be happy to post reviews if you'd like.

I do like this one, as well. :] I think you should keep going with it. It sounds really interesting.

i think you should keep it. it sounds interesting, too bad the firts chapter wasn't longer, but it was good-how it showed that she wasn't a normal teenager usually. very nice, and the guy you used in the character page was hot xD who is he?