The Sun Goes down Alone - Comments

  • I really loved this entry. I liked the letter format and how it said Dear mine, instead of a name. This had a very nostalgic and loving feeling that I really enjoyed. It was very honest and true, and yet it still seemed like a story.

    I enjoyed the quirkiness of this also. Like the part with your eyes while you cried, and how he could see your eyes in his; I really loved that. It has such a loving and caring feeling to it that I just love.

    I also liked how you had seemingly moved on and were with someone else, but still thought about him, and eventually broke up with that boyfriend. It was such a pleasant and honest read. I also like how well the title fits. This was really well written, I loved it.
    July 24th, 2010 at 11:01pm
  • I loved this.
    It was just fabulous. (:

    I especially loved the finishing lines:
    And that’s good. I have you in my memory the way I love it. The way I love you. And I will always do that.
    July 8th, 2010 at 02:55am