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  • Brain Dead Bipolar

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    AWE!!!

    That was super cute!!

    I enjoyed reading that one, especially after reading your other short story. :)

    Well done. You write very, very well. Extremely detailed, I could see the whole scene in my head.
    July 13th, 2011 at 08:21am
  • Qwott

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    This was really cute. (:

    The detail was wonderful and I loved the entire plot.
    You did an excellent job.
    September 21st, 2010 at 11:26pm
  • sainted swan

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    A pure white marshmallow fell into place above the flame held in place on a long stick by his four year old brother Jamie. - Yum, marshmallows <3

    The sparkle in the toddler's eyes faded slightly as he blew out the flame on the marshmallow and held it out for the husky on the floor beside him. - Beautiful love(:

    This story was so adorable (: <3
    You made one amazing story about a beautiful moment.
    Your detail is awesome as well. <3

    Nice job love
    September 21st, 2010 at 02:44am
  • Lunar

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    This was sweet, and cute.
    You have simplicity tone to your writing, and I like that.
    <3 nicely done.
    September 21st, 2010 at 01:27am
  • Bipolar Halo

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    This was adorable.

    It's like me and my little brother except I don't have a dick. XD

    Cool story. Sweet and endearing.
    July 29th, 2010 at 03:26am
  • Shall We Run?

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    awww cute!
    i want a little brother like that
    very well written, desirina :]
    July 28th, 2010 at 08:07am
  • breakfast after ten;

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    Aw, this is just too cute.
    I wish my little brother was that sweet. :P
    July 28th, 2010 at 07:23am
  • pezzie

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    Aww, this was really cute.
    I wish I had some smores right now. XD Ah.
    July 19th, 2010 at 09:23am
  • WaitingForAnEnd

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    Aww! I love how you described the fire and marshmellows. The brothers seem like they both love each other. It was..nice.
    July 8th, 2010 at 06:00am
  • WaitingForAnEnd

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    Aww! I love how you described the fire and marshmellows. The brothers seem like they both love each other. It was..nice.
    July 8th, 2010 at 06:00am
  • Dr.

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    Aw. :\

    That'z real nice.
    July 8th, 2010 at 05:44am
  • SNOOKI WAS HERE.

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    This was really cute. <3
    An... innocent style of writing? That's what I'd call it, any ways.
    It was simple, and just a nice read. :)
    July 8th, 2010 at 01:28am
  • Bones;

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    Aw, that's cute. I love moments like that.
    July 7th, 2010 at 11:57pm
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