One More Time. - Comments

I hope you get better soon!!!
I would wait a year for an update on this story as its amazing

hey, get better soon. take care of yourself...

happy new year too

L x

aww get well soon

I care...
Get better <3

great update
awww Ray has never had a boyfriend except Frank

More when you can plz!!!

lol do you know how much i LOVE twister right now??? XD fantastic darling, fantastic!

Mmmm so hot. More soon!

whoa go ray

Oh. My. Fuckin'. Mongoose.
Why Oh Why Oh Fuckin' Why Did I Not Read This Sooner!?
It's Absolutely Freakin' Incredible!!!
You're Writin' Is So Amazing...And You Wrote 'Those' *Wink Hehee Giggle Fit* Kind Of Scenes Really Well!!!
Like, Amazingly!!!
Gaaahhhh I Want More!!!
Hehehehee Update Soon!?! XD

Cam xx <3

"Hey Mikey fuck off and get your own yellow dot!"

OMFG! Im dying. I think that is honestly the best thing I have ever heard. And the thought of them standing on colorful dots just makes me smile. I loved the update. I cant stop laughing.

xoxo
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you are a tease! =(

SHIt i have done it again. I forgot to subscribe, but I am now so its ok.

great updates
when they gonna spill???

More when you can plz!!!

oh lordy... Twister.. now this is going to be fun :lmfao

i can't wait!!! TWISTERR!!!! XD this is going to be.....WHOA

omg, twas awesome

twister interesting

Mmmm very hot my dear! Update soon! I can't wait for some Ray/Frank action.

love it more please
UPDATES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

very nice. sorry i havent commented for ages but my computer's tried to commit suicide and keyboard doesn't work. anywho, great story so far can't wait for twister.....

yay! Two updates! And Twister!

xoxo
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