I didn't have anyone proof read mine...might anna do it when she gets back from Europe...God knows she's been waiting to critize my writing down into dirt for some time...
I like it... btw I didn't find a SINGLE spelling mistake in the WHOLE thing... I think she's out of her mind... my g-ma proofed mine so how could there possibly b any spelling errs... and as long as u had a real person proof urs and used the spell check button in the top left corner of the page then u should b fine 2... GRRRR HER!
Being as you and Cat are the first 2 to publish stuff, I've read the first paragraph of each story(only 1 paragraph) and have noticed grammar/spelling in both of them. Proof each other's stories before final judging. I'ma gonna be picky about grammar/spelling.