And So There Was A Note - Comments

  • She'sABeliever

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    ..........well thank you.
    I'm not bawling my eyes out or anything. -_-
    it's amazing. <3
    October 29th, 2012 at 11:26pm
  • XxSuicideQueenXx

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    omg i cryed its so sad but so good
    July 17th, 2011 at 07:49am
  • CivilAnimosity

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    Holy shit.
    You better of won this contest.
    January 11th, 2011 at 04:19am
  • polka dot perfection

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    I love this story so much even though I was almost crying it was so sad.
    I almost hate this story for being so good that I have to keep reading the sadness, but at the same time I love it.

    Poor Hiven!!! And poor Issac didn't have a bullet left to shoot himself. :( so sad.
    January 2nd, 2011 at 07:29pm
  • breathless lullabies

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    This made me sad but I enjoyed it. I wish I could see what will happen next but I guess, it ended perfectly right were it was. That mental disorder creeped me out a lot though. xD
    December 27th, 2010 at 06:05am
  • pezzie

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    This is absolutely amazing.
    July 28th, 2010 at 09:33pm
  • recounts

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    Wow, I loved it. It was fucked up - but I loved it. It was written really well and well... I liked the ending, as upsetting as it was. Because just when I thought that was it, that he was going to kill himself too, he's left without the bullet to do it.

    I really liked it. :] The characterisation of them both stayed consistent and as sad as the story is, and as sad as that mental condition is, you just can't deny this was really good.

    You better of won, hah.

    July 24th, 2010 at 09:56am
  • Farce.

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    Judging has begun! I liked the description of Hiven’s mangled body. I wasn’t quite sure what exactly Hiven was or what it meant by Issac had created him. The end of the note was enough to make me stop and sit there for a moment. Nice story.
    July 18th, 2010 at 11:10pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    Okay, so I just read it,
    and I must say, I'm fascinated by mental disorders,
    I don't know why, but anyways,
    I think you did an amazing job on this,
    and your idea was so original,
    you definitely deserve credit on this.
    <3
    July 13th, 2010 at 05:58pm
  • Unpretty

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    This was so cool
    July 11th, 2010 at 06:25am
  • xNeverMindx

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    I FUCKING LOVE IT! ITS AMAZING! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! KYRSTIN YOU ARE A TRUE GENIOUS!
    July 8th, 2010 at 10:59pm
  • MyWorstNightmare

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    i freakin love it!
    July 8th, 2010 at 08:34am