This was so sad. It's a great story too. I like that theres not a happy ending. I think it fits the story better. And you went very well with the song.
January 10th, 2012 at 02:35am
Love Is All That Matters After All - Comments
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I loved this so much. It was very sad and I thought there was goin to be a happy ending so it shocked me when there wasn't. I thought you followed the song very well and your writing style is very good.October 23rd, 2011 at 07:37pm
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What she said!
I agree! Why is your background so deceiving! I thought it would have a happy ending, b-b-b-but, there wasn't one! It was a surprise ending! Grrr at you and your literary devices! XD
Putting that aside. It did fit well with your beautiful writing in a very ironic way and I have to say, I hope a lot of people will be able to read this beautiful slice of life story.
The title is VERY well thought out too. Especially once you finish reading the story.
It was incredible how you put this together, and believe you-me, you deserve your two cherry tomatoes.
PS - The bus driver was so cool!
Can't wait for your next story, which I know won't be for a while. ^^;;!
CHEERS! XD!July 8th, 2010 at 06:30am -
:| I cried.
But, this was amazing.
I do suggest fixing up the layout abit, cuz it's not fitting.
Otherwise, your writing is more than amazing, doll.
I love the way you went about the song; I thought at first it'd follow the video, but you totally turned it around and gave me an unexpected ending.
Nice. :)July 8th, 2010 at 05:57am
