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  • alicia_9619

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    Oooh this story is really good! I wonder why Nick is being such an ass though, maybe he knows her or something from some time ago. Well I reaally cant wait for the next chapter so pleaaaaaase updaate soooon!(:
    June 28th, 2011 at 07:05am
  • ch33rali101

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    Hey i just read this and felllllllllllll in love with the characters:) you should update this!
    January 14th, 2011 at 03:57am
  • livelifetolove

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    I LOVE THIS STORY! It has absolutely hilarious moments, and yet it's also super touching. Right now I'm just wondering Nick's reason for being such an ass...?

    UPDATE SOON---puh-leaze? :)
    November 21st, 2010 at 03:50am
  • ShuperGurl143

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    Nick is a bit of a jerk. But nick wouldn't be nick if he wasn't. Love the story btw. Update asap.
    November 17th, 2010 at 11:28pm
  • Lon3lyangel

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    I loved chapter 5! Thanks for updating. Please update again soon! ^_^
    November 2nd, 2010 at 06:37pm
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! :) Aw, it was cute and funny, with all the joking around moments and such. But then a little intense when she overheard them talking about her, and especially with Nick kind of backtalking her. Harsh much? I mean, really, why isn't he more sweet like Joe? :D He doesn't really have a reason to hate her. And hm... you let us know more about her backstory, and why she is where she is. So... interesting and amazing update! I didn't think it was fillerish at all! :) Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
    October 17th, 2010 at 05:47am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    October 17th, 2010 at 04:07am
  • MurderComplication

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    Great update~
    Suck's that you got an evil year - mine's easy as hell >.< bad karma, eh?
    Shopping trip's gotta be plenty of fun~ ahaha
    <3
    October 17th, 2010 at 02:36am
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    Keep updating :D
    I LOVE IT!!!
    October 16th, 2010 at 05:46pm
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! Aw, I wonder why Nick's so mean to Shay? Or well, why he gives her dirty looks? I love that song you used at the beginning, even if you just put a snippet of it in there, lol. Hm, and I can't wait to see what happens with the whole dance competition thing; like how they figure it out. Aw, I love how Demi and Shay are friends, and I loved how they talked with each other at the end; they're just... there for one another. Overall, amazing update; didn't think it was boring at all. :) Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
    August 12th, 2010 at 04:50am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    August 11th, 2010 at 09:36pm
  • Lon3lyangel

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    Gosh. Why is Nick so cold towards Shay? Is he jealous of her or is he trying to push her away because he likes her? He's so confusing. Thanks for updating. Please update again soon.
    August 11th, 2010 at 06:39pm
  • AlmostLovelyDisaster

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    I really really really like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
    August 11th, 2010 at 05:38pm
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! Hm... I wonder what's got her hating Selena so much? I love how she's friends with Demi, though. :) And yay, you put the Jonas Brothers in the chapter! :) Even though Nick wasn't being the most friendly, I loved the part where him and Shay demonstrated the dance. :) Haha, and the part with Joe was funny; I loved it! :) So no, I don't think it was too soon to put them in; it was just right. :) Overall, great update! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
    August 3rd, 2010 at 05:51am
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    August 3rd, 2010 at 04:35am
  • hockeychic3

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    You're a good writter and I like your story! Please update it soon! (:
    August 2nd, 2010 at 09:09pm
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! I didn't mind if it was a filler, you're still explaining her situation more, which is good. :) I like how you put another flashback in it. :) Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
    July 23rd, 2010 at 03:28am
  • Lon3lyangel

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    I love chapter 2! When is Nick going to come into the story? lol I love this story! Thanks for updating. Please update again soon!
    July 22nd, 2010 at 06:32pm
  • Pufferfish8D

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    July 22nd, 2010 at 04:00pm
  • MurderComplication

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    Wow - I'm excited to see what happens : D
    I even subscribed ahaha
    <3
    July 22nd, 2010 at 04:32am