Unwanted Attraction - Comments

Bubblegum Pops (100)

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Update soon please!!<3
Taylor Lautner is amazing!!!

June 26th, 2011 at 02:17am

xLxOxVxEx (150)

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Okay i liked it...BUT It would be easier if the dialogue was more spread out or in their own paragraphs.I'm not trying to be mean just trying to help you =) I'll definitely be a reader by the way! keep up the good work =)

July 13th, 2010 at 03:27am

aquanette0love (100)

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lol nice so far.
*subscribe*
great job

July 11th, 2010 at 12:25am

sleepyhollow; (100)

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Ooh i love Taylor Lautner :)
This is great so far :)
Keep up the good work :D

July 9th, 2010 at 12:21pm

sensiblehearts (100)

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Okay, so I do like the plot line and everything, but a little pet peeve of mine is like not using paragraphs :P It's just easier to read if everything is organized that way.
But I do like the story :) sorry if it didn't seem that way haha

July 9th, 2010 at 04:16am

luke ham ham. (100)

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Oh my god! I love this!!!!! :D
Update soooon <3

July 9th, 2010 at 02:13am

German13 (200)

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i like your story so far! i'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this story! Please update soon!

July 8th, 2010 at 06:32am