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  • Lithium.

    Lithium. (100)

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    Whoa! I wasn't expecting that, I'm not going to lie.
    Haha, I loved it.
    Totally awkward situation...
    July 19th, 2010 at 07:46am
  • travellingnorth.

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    Ohai.
    This is so awkward! I love it, I really do. I wasn't even really sure where it was going, but then at the end I was like 'whoa...! o.0'
    I liked the way you kepy calling her mom by mommy, which made it sound so innocent, which made the climax even better!
    I really enjoyed it :D
    Good job!
    July 10th, 2010 at 09:13pm
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