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  • still waters;

    still waters; (100)

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    Wow, this was really good. I love all the emotion you put in just a short amount of words.
    <3 (:
    January 23rd, 2011 at 06:55pm
  • chana300

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    Like the start a lot. is definitively something that got me hook. I'm curios of what will happen after this :)
    November 2nd, 2010 at 03:10am
  • MakingMeFamous

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    It`s good, I had to read it twice to understand though, but that`s cause I`m slow. Amazing.
    October 23rd, 2010 at 06:54pm
  • Geek In The Pink

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    wow. Just wow. I wish I had something constructive to say, but that was so amazing :)
    September 15th, 2010 at 09:36pm
  • Coheed Kilgannon

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    Wow.

    The way you wrote his mom's fear, you definitely feel what she was feeling. It was very well-written too.
    August 15th, 2010 at 03:08am
  • silk tea.

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    One small error. You spelled foreign wrong.

    Otherwise.

    I fucking love Remus Lupin. I think he's maybe one of my favorite characters.
    This story was lovely.
    I so totally wish Lupin wouldn't have died, and Tonks and him would've stayed together.

    [that's off topic. but]

    I absolutely adore this story though.
    Elizabeth is his mother I'm assuming[dur], but the way you wrote this was exquisite and perfect and just...wow.

    What exactly is a droubble by the way?
    July 14th, 2010 at 05:18am