Beyond 2,000 Light Years Away... - Comments

Just beautiful

haha they went bang bang bang

there will be a sequel. everything is written but I'll put it up sometime next week.

thank you guys so much for reading it, i really appreciate it.

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!
I DEMAND ONE!!

OMG YOU HOE HOW CAN YOU FINISH SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY LIKE THIS I SWEAR IMMA CRY RIGHT NOW
SEE WHAT YOU MAKE ME DO

will there be a sequel?

THERE BETTER BE<33333333

YOU BETTER WRITE A SEQUEL OR I SWEAR TO GOD ):<

I'm sorry you don't understand it well. But, thanks for reading it.

oh.... now i see. sorry. =( .

Me and Faby thought people would be smart enough to understand that when this line is over, the P.O.V. will switch.

Yeah, it's Adie then Billie, then Adie, then Billie.

I just thought it'd be annoying because most of them are hardly even a line.

i get that you said it, but its really confusing the way that you wrote it. i mean, it'd be better if you said "billie's p.o.v" or something. cause you have one person talking, then a space, then it switches characters. is it adie, then billie? sorry, it was kind of confusing the way it was written.

OH SHIT

DAMN CLIFF HANGER!!!

^ that's the point, I said in the beginning it switches from point of view to point of view.... i had said it in the beginning if you read it. obviously you didn't but w/e.

I like it, except i can never keep up with who is talking. it switches.... and it's so confusing.

ahh, yes. bang bang ;)

BANG BANG (;

haha, thanks. that pretty sums up the chapter in a nutshell.

"THEY WENT BANG BANG."

That made me smile at the end. :D

but thank you.