Reasons To Live - Comments

I love how, since you didnt want HIM to die, you tied the picture into the story(: Your story had my favorite things to read: sadness and love(: I really liked your story, it was well put together, there was one typo I noticed, to instead of too, but thats not a big deal(: Good luck in the contest(:

that was an great story, a great way to look at life

I love this story. My cousin died of Pancreatic Cancer the day of my birthday party, and even though he had only met me once, had three kids, and a wife, he talked about me to my mom and remembered everything about me. I've never felt so important in my life. This story reminds me of him, and that everyone in his life was important, even in the end.

Read all three, they're amazing. :) Talented writer.