Amazing. This might be the best one-shot I've ever read. I love how it was all based around time. Such a unique concept. The rest of your stories are definitely going on my "need to read"-list.
You definitely wrote a very unique story. Something I have not read before. I really loved the story and your basis around time was very clever and creative. Anyway, you’ve received 95 points for your entry and 20 bonus points, 5 of them for creativity I have not seen yet. Congrats! PM me for your detailed grading.