Don't Hold This War Inside - Comments

okay, love it! it's original and I'm looking forward to your next update! :D

I agree with lol cannibals! haha
Please update soon! ;D

UPDATE!
PLEASEEEE.
I wanna see some sexy jasper!

Ahh finally an update!!!!!!!!! So excited! This story is so different from most twilight fan fictions and I love it! Please update most soon! I would love to know what happens!! ;D

What. The. Heck. Happend?
Dude now you got me waiting even more...
Update asap

What. The. Heck. Happend?
Dude now you got me waiting even more...
Update asap

this is an awesome story

keep it up and update

LOVE IT
UPDATE A.S.A.P

I loved it! You must update when you have the time! :)

Update i can't wait

It's amazing <3 (:
Can't wait for more!

update soon

love it

PLEASE UPDATE D;
I NEED ITTT!

UPDATE SOON

UPDATE SOON
love it

love it

update soon

i HATE cliff hangers

i am ssssssooooo excited for the next chapter.

update soon

Of course you would leave it on a cliff hanger. I'm very excited for the next chapter, update soon!! Oh, and I second what taztm14 said, you wrote "Hale" instead of, i'm pretty sure was meant to be, "Whitlock".
But other than that, wonderful job so far. =D

This is a great chapter, keep it up!

I really enjoy this story, but something that caught my attention was in chapter 9 you refered to Jasper as Jasper Hale, in that time he was still known as Jasper Whitlock if I'm not mistaken.

I can't wait to read more though! :)