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  • JustThinking

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    okay, love it! it's original and I'm looking forward to your next update! :D
    November 25th, 2010 at 07:43pm
  • venture;;

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    I agree with lol cannibals! haha
    Please update soon! ;D
    November 25th, 2010 at 12:41am
  • Porcelain Black

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    UPDATE!
    PLEASEEEE.
    I wanna see some sexy jasper!
    November 13th, 2010 at 02:48am
  • venture;;

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    Ahh finally an update!!!!!!!!! So excited! This story is so different from most twilight fan fictions and I love it! Please update most soon! I would love to know what happens!! ;D
    November 8th, 2010 at 03:06am
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    What. The. Heck. Happend?
    Dude now you got me waiting even more...
    Update asap
    November 8th, 2010 at 02:34am
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    What. The. Heck. Happend?
    Dude now you got me waiting even more...
    Update asap
    November 8th, 2010 at 02:34am
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    this is an awesome story

    keep it up and update
    October 11th, 2010 at 01:48am
  • aprilm405

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    LOVE IT
    UPDATE A.S.A.P
    October 3rd, 2010 at 04:40pm
  • Essie:P

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    I loved it! You must update when you have the time! :)
    October 3rd, 2010 at 04:18pm
  • Art_Flavor

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    Update i can't wait
    October 3rd, 2010 at 08:26am
  • WtftXDino

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    It's amazing <3 (:
    Can't wait for more!
    September 1st, 2010 at 04:04pm
  • why.LOVE.me?

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    update soon

    love it
    August 26th, 2010 at 02:37pm
  • Porcelain Black

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    PLEASE UPDATE D;
    I NEED ITTT!
    August 26th, 2010 at 02:02am
  • aprilm405

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    UPDATE SOON
    August 23rd, 2010 at 08:26pm
  • aprilm405

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    UPDATE SOON
    love it
    August 21st, 2010 at 03:59pm
  • why.LOVE.me?

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    love it

    update soon

    i HATE cliff hangers
    August 19th, 2010 at 11:39pm
  • why.LOVE.me?

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    i am ssssssooooo excited for the next chapter.

    update soon
    August 15th, 2010 at 03:17pm
  • xDiscoBallx

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    Of course you would leave it on a cliff hanger. I'm very excited for the next chapter, update soon!! Oh, and I second what taztm14 said, you wrote "Hale" instead of, i'm pretty sure was meant to be, "Whitlock".
    But other than that, wonderful job so far. =D
    August 10th, 2010 at 09:07am
  • LatinBookReader

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    This is a great chapter, keep it up!
    August 10th, 2010 at 03:56am
  • taztm14

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    I really enjoy this story, but something that caught my attention was in chapter 9 you refered to Jasper as Jasper Hale, in that time he was still known as Jasper Whitlock if I'm not mistaken.

    I can't wait to read more though! :)
    August 10th, 2010 at 03:27am
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