There's Something Wrong With Gerard - Comments

  • Mikey96

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    Yes, I AM aware of that....they just don't sell them at walmart anymore..
    August 22nd, 2010 at 07:32am
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    Yes, I AM aware of that....they just don't sell them at walmart anymore..
    August 22nd, 2010 at 07:32am
  • Ricky Gee

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    Oh fuck, someone needs a life XDD
    August 13th, 2010 at 05:13am
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    We disscussed this, Erica. If there's not a post when you get back I will be forced to Zombie your face and steal your skeleton gloves.....
    August 13th, 2010 at 04:05am
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    We disscussed this, Erica. If there's not a post when you get back I will be forced to Zombie your face and steal your skeleton gloves.....
    August 13th, 2010 at 04:05am
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    We disscussed this, Erica. If there's not a post when you get back I will be forced to Zombie your face and steal your skeleton gloves.....
    August 13th, 2010 at 04:05am
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    MORRRRREEEEEEEE *Rawrs* NEED TO READ MORREEEE OR I'LL GO ALL ZOMBIE ON YOU!
    August 10th, 2010 at 11:23pm
  • ALOTA

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    Wonderful. I was hooked since the epilogue. Very dark and creepy. I loveee it!!!
    July 30th, 2010 at 11:38pm
  • trashlee_F

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    love the new chapter, i have no criticisms can't wait for the next one :)
    July 29th, 2010 at 10:46am
  • Mikey96

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    yay! it's so awesome!! i'm semi-pateintly waiting for the next chapter!
    July 22nd, 2010 at 01:51am
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    Honestly, I loved the layout. My eyes are very sensitive and I saw no problem with it. The story...it is fucking amazing girl! I WANT TO READ MORE!!

    And I love how it's not like all the other Frerards, it's different...and CAN I BE A DEAD BODY???? :DD

    Amazing, brilliant, SUPER! and (to me this is Ghost Buster famous) HAHAHA! Points.
    July 11th, 2010 at 10:25pm
  • Ricky Gee

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    Argh! I don't know what to do for the layout! Everyone is telling me it's not good or whatever. Any ideas?
    July 11th, 2010 at 08:21am
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    i really like it. and shed youur yellow is right the title is totally awesome. can't wait for the next update
    July 11th, 2010 at 08:11am
  • Patty Lovell

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    Oh my god. I absolutely love the title! There's Something Wrong With Gerard'
    ^^ heehee.
    I loved the story line plot thing, it's crasy awesome.

    The only thing is, the red contrasting with the black in the layout makes my eyes sore after a while :/
    July 11th, 2010 at 08:06am
  • Sundance Kid.

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    The only things I have wrong with this story is that the layout is distracting, as Acid Milk said, and the wording is bit off. Otherwize the story was awesome, and I loved the idea. Keep up the good work.
    July 11th, 2010 at 04:27am
  • Sundance Kid.

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    The only things I have wrong with this story is that the layout is distracting, as Acid Milk said, and the wording is bit off. Otherwize the story was awesome, and I loved the idea. Keep up the good work.
    July 11th, 2010 at 04:27am
  • Acid Milk

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    The layout is a bit distracting on this, but otherwise, the story was good. :)
    I don't really go out of my way to read Gerad Way fanfiction, but this was nice. It doesn't seem to cliche, and I really like it. :)
    July 11th, 2010 at 02:25am
  • Ricky Gee

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    You can see right through me ^_^ Thanks!
    July 11th, 2010 at 02:03am
  • LadyLawliet

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    Hmm...what can I say about what I just read? well for starters...It was fucken awesome! Seriously, great writing. Really great writing. I'm so anxious to see what happens next! You have to make another chapter soon. Also great job with the summary of the relationship Frankie/Gerard. Reminds me of me and someone else I happen to know ;)
    July 11th, 2010 at 02:01am