The only things I have wrong with this story is that the layout is distracting, as Acid Milk said, and the wording is bit off. Otherwize the story was awesome, and I loved the idea. Keep up the good work.
The only things I have wrong with this story is that the layout is distracting, as Acid Milk said, and the wording is bit off. Otherwize the story was awesome, and I loved the idea. Keep up the good work.
The layout is a bit distracting on this, but otherwise, the story was good. :) I don't really go out of my way to read Gerad Way fanfiction, but this was nice. It doesn't seem to cliche, and I really like it. :)
Hmm...what can I say about what I just read? well for starters...It was fucken awesome! Seriously, great writing. Really great writing. I'm so anxious to see what happens next! You have to make another chapter soon. Also great job with the summary of the relationship Frankie/Gerard. Reminds me of me and someone else I happen to know ;)