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  • boychild.

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    I'll start with saying that I've only watched one episode or two of Glee, and though liking the show, I don't really know who everybody is – I had to google to see who were who of the girls in the picture tehe
    But I still enjoyed reading it, it were nice seeing a story about just friendship between girls, without it focusing too much on the drama in the past, just showing that it's there, and focusing more on the now.

    verprotective and Puck-ish as always
    This had me giggle, even though not knowing who Puck were tehe

    but it’s nice to be nice to the girl
    I'm not really fond of the repetition of 'nice' so soon after each other, it stops the flow of the story for me.

    While I am grateful for your sudden friendship, I don’t know if the others are quite as accepting
    This might be just me, but this line seems a bit... forced. I don't know if this is the normal way for Rachel to be talking, but it seem sort of old fashioned for a teenager to say.

    Those are the only things I really have to comment on, otherwise I fully enjoyed reading about their friendship, and I feel so sorry for Rachel being in such stress, poor girl :/ Arms

    Great job, sweetie ^^
    July 21st, 2010 at 12:21am
  • roe.

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    Aw I loved this. Poor Rachel. D:
    I like the part where Rachel goes on and on about why she was crying, she would so do that.

    Speaking of things that make her happy, Puck is still there, overprotective and Puck-ish as always.

    And of course, this made me giggle. :)
    July 9th, 2010 at 03:41pm
  • legacy .

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    Friendship.

    This was the cutest thing ever.
    Quinn and Rachel would make the cutest pair.
    As friends, I mean.
    You did this perfectly.
    I loved it : D
    July 9th, 2010 at 01:37pm