All Is Done, There Is Nothing Left To Say - Comments

Damn just about all your one shots need to he made into stories bc they didn't get a good ending. I hope you would think about it. There's some that would probably be good stories!

This is a really good story! Continue!!

This one awesome oneshot!
Breaks my heart though to see that Brian give false hope to Jessica thinking that she would spend the rest of her life with him when he's been going to another whore behind her back.
After all the work she has done to make Brian happy.
I really want you to make a sequel or a short story out of this one shot because Brian deserves the pain he put Jessica through, leaving her for a slut he met at a bar.
And caught in the moment to even put protection one, a pathetic excuse!!!!!
He should see how happy she is now that she getting married to another man and that she cut him out of her life.
And he had the to tell her that he still wanted to be friends with her after he shattered her heart!!!!
He is one man whore, stupid asshole whose deserves to have his weenie cut off!!!!!
If someone did that to me, I would defiantly cut them out of my life and make them feel guilty like hell.
I really hope you consider my idea because I want Brian to pay for being unfaithful to Jessica because he also lost a best friend too and I bet the guys kicked his ass for his stupidity and whoring ways.
At least I hope they did.
I enjoy this one shot and look forward to the new stories you will come up with!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

thats really good :) tehe, my name is Savannah...XD

That was really good, I think you should turn it into a story.

that was great

That would REALLY suck.
Like really bad.
>.<