It's a good story :) There is one major problem I have with it, I'm finding it really difficult to read because some of your grammar is a bit messed up and some of your words and sentences are a bit incomplete....Sorry I'm an English student so I'm a bit of a grammar nazi.... Just try and proof read your stuff before you post it :) The story itself is really good though :)
I don't usually read stories like this, but this one is really, really good. I didn't get the first chapter; at first, I totally thought he was falling in love with, like, a thirteen year old or something, which seems just slightly unlikely and really creepy to me. I think you should make that a bit clearer, add details here and there, don't work with this story solely on dialogue; I didn't realize that they were both older than their teens until I read the author's note. Anyways, you have a great start and I wish you luck with this story (:
Oh my freaking gosh! I love you! I have been waiting for these updates for like ever I mean I'm so excited for the next chapters!!!!! I'm excited to see the gander and the names picked, and like so much more I can't even put it all down. Well, anyways updates soon. I'm obsessed with this story!!
I love this, it's adorable, and the cruel text's are really pique-ing my interest, I have a theory on who they are from, but I won't say, just in case I'm the only one :P But come on, you gotta update soon :( -puppy dog eyes- I hate that they had a fight though :( Then again, it wouldn't be realistic if they never fought, would it? I really do love this though :P Good job :D <3