Crazy In Love - Comments

This is so cute. Forgot to look at the publish date on this, but if you ever still feel like writing, a little sequel to this could be welcomed.

i really liked this one shot, one of the best i've read! great job!

SO GOOD! so much depth too, it wasn't just a one-dimensional story. i loved it! :)

Wow, I loved this. I was so into the story. And being a Bergy fan myself, I was like wow.. <3
This was well-written and I can actually kinda understand where both of them in the relationship were coming from.
The descriptions you used gave me goosebumps and I can't even...wow. Haha. Good job.

i definitely loved the dynamic of their relationship.
it's refreshing to see the guy want more for once ;)
very, very well written!
good job!

Love it - and I want that pic! I'm just saying... He actually is that charming in real life too (sigh).

And I really want the pic!!

Cute cute cute cute. Bergy is perfect in this... as he is in most stories because he's well you know. You've loved him for like seven years haha. I like the little flashbacks to show just how slow the two of them progressed in their relationship. From her drunken confession to him saying I love you. It's just ... well cute. Kind of sad how the boys whining about their girlfriends/wives makes him realize hey... why aren't we living together? Which kinda creates the whole little issue here. I like that she didn't blow up at him and tried to talk about it rationally. And you just knew reading that he said meet me here and I will wait this long for you... that she was going to show up. How could she not? It's Patrice fucking Bergeron. You do not leave him haha. And the end was just lovely. I like how he's all do I have to do something like this when I ask you to marry me? And she's allll mayyyybe haha. Lovely lovely Burr. <3