Oh my god, i loved this! I think i like the alt ending more though-- even if it is more tragic. Everyone could use a nice dose of Tragedy every now and then, right?
Aww, wifey. That was pretty sad, at the beginning, then got happier, but without getting happier at the same time, at the end. I reckon you should do an alternative ending....go with what you asked me earlier!! I love things like that...!! :D