There's More Than Meets The Eye 'Round Here - Comments

Ah, man.
This was awesome! :D
I loved it and I usually hate fan fics.

I really like the plot to this but I think that you should put more thought into your characters heads, even when they say things.

(: Other than that, it was great.

Damn make this longer!

I want more! I want more!

Don't make me start a Riot in this piece!

Dude that was flucking awesome. I loved it. Think I am going to give fan fics a shot.

This was really good, I love your writing.
And yeah, it was really long. Aha. <3

The only problem, the font color hurt my eyes a little.
Meh. Maybe that's just me.

Pretty awesome!!
I like your writing, it was freaking long though!!
Great story, rock on:)

Amazing!! I love it!!

♥kk&&gates

tehe, it's coolies man <3

Avenged*

Well it was very long. I liked it. (:

I don't like Avanged Sevenfold though. :/

Your creativity with the plot was spot on but your grammar didn’t exactly impress me. It seemed rushed and there was too much dialogue throughout the story. That’s your only downfall though. You’ve received 90 points. Congrats!
PM me to see your detailed grading.

I really liked this and I wouldn't change anything really apart from do another update for their first date coz i'm a sucker for romance lol

Seriously i really liked it and it was good writing.

Keep up the good work xoxo

Awww this was good, it provess you can't judge a person by their appearance and their job.

I liked this alot. :)