Commuting to My Heart - Comments

I liked this story. I loved how you developed the plot & worked it out. The ending was really sweet. But I really wanted to know what happened to her father? Did he just thought she died?

Overall, a great story.

loved thi story but i feel like there is more to it, like what happened to her dad. you should do a sequel

I'm really liking it! But there is one spelling mistake that's happened more than once. Barely is spelled just like that. Barley is a type of grain grown to make beer and other things.... Sorry if I seem kinda mean, it was just irking me a little.

I really liked this story! (: Great job! I love Patrick Kane and it was well written! :D

Cute ending

i loved this story
great job : )

loved it =)
this story was great!

loved it!!
my e-mail subs weren't working so I had nooooo idea you updated!
but i'm all caught up now!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE =D

fantastic update!
loved it!

Why'd she leave her work by herself?! She must have known he would follow her!
Hope she's okay, can't wait for Patrick to get there!

OMG! I hope she is okay and they catch her dad and the other guy!! Update soon please!

Update again NOW! Please please please please please please, pretty please with patrick kane on top?

I loved the update. Can't wait for the next one! :)

She should definitely go to Patrick's house for Christmas!

really cute chapter, loved it!

LOVEDDDDDDDDDD THE UPDATE =D
more sooon!!

aw poor Lexi, I feel so bad for her :(

stupid kaner, bringing a puck bunny back. i am so glad he realized his feelings for lexi. update soon!

dammit for kaner bring a girl back!!!
HE BETTER MAKE IT RIGHT!
loved the update hun! =)
cannot wait for more!!

aww I'm so glad she told Patrick!
great update, cant wait for more!