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  • Baiser De La Mort

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    Aw the kids are so cute.
    <3
    July 22nd, 2010 at 10:03am
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    I already read this story on quizilla but I decided to juust reread it again since I love it sooooo much.
    July 22nd, 2010 at 08:12am
  • Castillox3

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    Please more! It's good :D
    July 22nd, 2010 at 07:26am
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    oo a playdate :) how cute
    i loved it!
    July 22nd, 2010 at 02:20am
  • Rayn's Vengeance6661

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    omg thats so cute that reseme n her lil sis will b freindz :) update was great n please update soon again :o i wanna know when jacob will tell her that he likes her :P
    July 21st, 2010 at 11:15pm
  • XOXloveangelXOX

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    Nessie and Amber are so cute together please update soon :)
    July 21st, 2010 at 10:09pm
  • Erinnnn.xo

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    great update!
    amber is so cute
    July 21st, 2010 at 09:54pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    plz udpate soon!!!! i luv it!
    July 21st, 2010 at 08:53pm
  • autumnfreakshow

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    I don't know why but this update made me smile :]

    it was cute how the two sisters interacted!

    Great udpate and I can't wait for more :]
    July 21st, 2010 at 08:40pm
  • PourquoiBella

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    :D more preaseeee
    July 21st, 2010 at 06:09pm
  • hachie

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    Awww her and her sister are so adorable together! X3
    I guess that part one of the rare moments where Eli is herself.
    Man Bella is going to get after Jacob for hurting his imprint.
    LOL her sister doesn't know that she is trying to get them together.
    Well I love this chapter and hope you update soon again!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    July 21st, 2010 at 05:22pm
  • pixiedusttt.

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    Looks like Elaina is bothered that Jacob still has feelings for Bella...
    Please update soon!!! <3
    July 21st, 2010 at 01:21pm
  • No Tomorrow

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    I've finally caught up! took me long enough lol.
    I just love how this story is going, I really do!
    And I grinned when Eliana was slightly miffed at the thought of Jacob still liking Bella lol.
    Can't wait for the next update!
    July 21st, 2010 at 11:45am
  • XOXloveangelXOX

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    at least now he knows how he really feels about her :)
    please keep updating!
    July 20th, 2010 at 09:08pm
  • ameliabelle

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    oh naughty jacob.. i wonder how he'll make it up to her :)

    i loved it, make sure you're careful with first, second and third person narrative though because you switch between the two :) nothing big, just a thought and definitely not an insult :)
    July 20th, 2010 at 02:45pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    Keep it up, I love the story.
    July 20th, 2010 at 01:16am
  • pixiedusttt.

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    :(
    Poor Jake...
    but it looks like Elaina isn't going to forgive too soon...
    Please update soon! <3
    July 19th, 2010 at 06:56pm
  • Erinnnn.xo

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    Jacob is in the dog house for sure
    July 19th, 2010 at 05:47pm
  • hachie

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    Man Jacob is in a lot of trouble with her.
    I bet she won't talk to him because of how he hurt her.
    I really wish he would get over Bella, now that he has an imprint.
    I wish he would realize that she is happy with Edward, and the fact she has a child and is a vampire.
    Well I love the chapter, update soon again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    July 19th, 2010 at 05:45pm
  • Baiser De La Mort

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    tisk tisk jacob should really control
    his temper! <3
    July 19th, 2010 at 05:30pm
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