True Lies - Comments

Hey there! Sooo- of course, I enjoyed the story. Again. That's a given. I noticed a lot of spelling errors though- I believe it was chapter 10 that Jacob was wearing "college" instead of cologne. If he wasn't, do pretend I didn't just say that. And the other thing is the "bumps" that I believe stand for Jake's abs. The word just really makes me picture a baby "bump". And a pregnant Jacob is a very horrifying concept *shudders* who was the cabin mate again? Seth and his girl need to sort their things out!

U should really finish this story and post the sequel already lol :) cuz now I'm like waiting and it's making me sad :( lol keep up the awesome work ;]

aww seth better be okay!! T.T but adorable ending! :D please update soon!

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Poor Seth.
He probably would be his bubbly self again and probably make jokes.
^-^
Lols

I meant to type were not where. :P Silly me. :)

*sniffles* Poor Seth. He's just so bubbly I love it. :)

I figure you've already got this covered (and by that I mean coming up in another chapter) as to who the vampires where?

As always I love it. I almost cried when I heard Seth was hurt.

You're such a great writer!!!!!!

major cliffhanger. I love it! Update soon please!

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Awww man this is like a cliffhanger.
I hope your writers block is gone.
Update!

Update sooon

haha totally love that chapter!! xD high schools good how about you :)

I really like this story. It keeps me on the edge of my seat while making it easy to stop reading if I had too. It's thrilling and I love the development of your characters. I can tell you've got some things (probably) up your sleeve. I can't wait to see where it all goes!!!! *five thumbs way up*

this story is so amazing :D

i think they should go "further" really soon...
but then after she realizes she wasnt ready... o:

i think that would create some interesting conflict ;)

xx Amber

I Love this story. It is absolutely amazing. Not to mention the fact that Jacob is damn hot :)

awwww its so cute but i feel soooooooooooo bad for seth!! :'( please update soon!!

really good please update soon!! :D

its amazing

i did!!!

i knew she was gonna be a vampire it was just the most resonable explanation...

I totally didn't expect this! Tomorrow, she should go back to that clearing she went to at the beginning and see if she can find Sophie there, like she did in her dream. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

uh oh. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

I love this story. I started reading just today and I finished within the hour. I'm addicted. Keep writing!