Omg. Good luck! I'll be able to say I read one of her stories when she just started writing. XD I loved the two updates. Thank god she isn't pregnant. I can't wait for another update!
I must disagree with bapple. I can tell it will end great by this chapter alone. It's quite hard to accomplish that in the writing world, but you have completely blown my expections to a whole new level.
The only thing I would say to check into, is your grammer. There are places were commas can help clarify certain elements.
Besides that extremely minor detail, this is one of the better-written stories that I've seen in a while, so early on in their development. I hope you continue this story. (:
Well I most deff. liked the first chapter. You can't be sure from the first if it's going to end up good , but your Jasper story seems promising :) Can't wait for the next chapter!! Loved him saying "Oliver Twist is a great one." It made me giggle, lol XD Keep them comming keep them comming!
July 12th, 2010 at 07:37am
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