Wild Hearts - Comments

I just read all of this so far. I really like it and can't wait for more!

FINALLY some action for the two of them. I mean, the story IS called Wild Hearts after all.

I read the whole thing in one go :D kickass, man. I wanna punch Ash in the face to be honest. Get her shit together! Haha :)

They seem to be Ok, which I like.
Can't wait to see what arises next though :)

Awwww!<3
And my names Ashley!!!! I'm not at ALL like her though haha;)

This is supposed to be a Jack's story, right? Well then I'd focus more on him than Aiden or David or those two brothers of hers. It feel as though he would be left out. Gonna keep on reading anyway and can't wait for your update! :) :) :)

I like how that chapter was had a little bit of Ashley feeling something more just like Jack did, yet Aiden felt nothing like she claimed she did.

I like this story :) It's really good and I can't wait to see where you're going with it :)

that was so good!! im really liking this story. oh, and where do you find pictures of those sexy mother fuckers! haha they are all such babes.

Parents dating not fun, and ooh, Aiden importantly later?
hmm.

keep going with this !

So I just read the first chappie and I love it! On to more reading!

MORE. kthanks

I could just imagine how awkward that whole scene must have been, I feel bad for both of them in different ways.
:/
but definitely continue I love this!

Awww please please please update soon! This is going well so far..

You might want to check out my story aswell ;)

http://stories.mibba.com/read/287067/Give-me-the-cold-shoulder/

i have a feeling this is going to be really interesting :) :)

This is really good!:D
Keep writing please(:

Fantastic!
and I love your user name by the way

i don't usually read fan fictions, but this one is great! keep up with it :)

its great, keep going :)

One chapter and I like it already.
Can't wait for an update!