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  • carolinecomeau

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    Yay!
    I am breaking your story comments virginity haha =P
    I really like the start of this.
    The main character is very human and I like that and he is very interesting.
    I also like the choice of names that you chose. Very unique and different. This is a great start and you write well. There was only one mistake in Chapter three you have see instead of seem.
    Great job girly! XD
    July 15th, 2010 at 01:39am
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