That Should Be Me - Comments

  • primark

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    Omg. I cant get over how good you are at writing stories.YOU ARE AMAZING.
    Please write some more like this. Wow. Still not over it!

    Sammy x
    September 4th, 2010 at 03:53pm
  • polkadottedgiraffe11

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    I liked it, it was very cute! =)
    July 24th, 2010 at 01:31am
  • Effing Perfect.

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    AH! I just loved it! This i think is one of my favorite songs that you can write a story about! A lot of one shots, you know how they are going to end. This one kept you guessing, you didn't know if they were going to get together, and Grace and Adam would break up or if justin would find someone new! I just loved it! Thanks a BUNCH for entering my Justin Bieber Writing Contest!

    -Baylee(:

    P.S. Around the begining you accidentally used the name Oliva instead of Grace, but no worries, it doesn't matter, I just thought you would want to change it(:
    July 21st, 2010 at 08:11pm