The Kids Are Alright - Comments

This is a wonderful story, the writing is superb and there are few spelling/grammatical errors. I love Nikki and Stevie! Sam is a total jerk and dislike her with a passion! Zacky...Ugh total jerkface. I love the band members (except Brian) and the band member's significant others, they're awesome. I hope Sam and Gena are able to mend their relationship but not before Sam gets the hell beaten out of her. :(

Are you going to update this story? Love It!

Is this going to be updated? :D x

Love this please update soon

I just found this story, but I love it. Can't wait to read what comes next.

Good luck! I have complete faith in you. :)

Good to see someone took over for Mockingbird. I love this story and didn't want it to be deleted. So thank you for taking over =)

I read the last chapter and I would love to take over this story for you. I have a avenged sevenfold story called second heartbeat so if you want to check out before you decide that would be cool. So yeah it would be awesome if I could commender this for you.

Loved it!! I can't wait for the next update!! :)

Nice! you updated{: Can't wait for the next one!

Omph.
I really do not enjoy Sam.
At all.

Ugh. Sam planning something?

Oh yeah, this can only end happily.

Sam's such a bitch, I just wanna lock her in a small crate and ship her to Djibuti, Africa.

great story. cant wait for the next part...

i really like this story great job cant wait for more :)

I'm really liking this so far. The only thing I keep noticing is the mixing up of your/you're in the story. You're is a contraction of 'you are' and your is the possessive form of you. The easiest way to figure out which one to use is to say the sentence out loud, but replace it with 'you are' and if it makes sense, use 'you're'. "You are a brat" makes sense so you can make it "You're a brat" but "You are shoes are green" doesn't so you'd have it as "Your shoes are green". Hope that helped.

i love this story. i usually dont even bother reading stories that havent been udated in a long time, but i saw this one and couldnt stop myself from clicking on it.

Now...

Amazing story line. Sam is being a real spoiled brat and Brian and Zack are to soft when it comes to Sam. I feel really bad for Gena and Michelle always having to deal with their shit. Stevie an Nikki, they are strong girls for coming to find their father-even though he rejects them-and still staying around, even if only to try and have some fun in Cali.

Love this story

UPDATE REALLY SOON!!!!!

*laughs crazily* omg, this is epic. I love how people hate me so much :P

This is awesome bug, I love when you update. Makes my day!

Love you so much, please update soon!

Creech

I'm still really addicted to this story, because of how amazing of a writer you are.

Great update. Keep up with the awesome writing.