aww that was cute. I think that you're friend likes it. haha. I really like the characterization. I don't like the eeevvviiillll ex. XP!!! it's over, get over it. Alex kinda way over reacted there, but it adds to the story and I love it. XD!! great job. XD!!
OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS!!!!! I wanted to punch Alex when I read the part where he was yelling, but then he was sad and jealous and so protective of her! Love it Love it Love itLove it Love it Love itLove it Love it Love itLove it Love it Love itLove it Love it Love itLove it Love it Love itLove it Love it Love itLove it Love it Love itLove it Love it Love it <3
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