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  • Phenakistoscope.

    Phenakistoscope. (205)

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    I really quite liked this. Simple, yet mysterious. Different to your usual stuff, and it worked really well :)

    Relation to stimulus: 9
    Storyline: 8
    Grammar and punctuation: 9
    Language used: 9
    Credibility: 8
    Emotive: 8
    August 18th, 2010 at 06:33am
  • Copyright Regulation

    Copyright Regulation (100)

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    Beautifully written
    August 13th, 2010 at 06:16am
  • allison wonderland

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    Aww twas cute my dear :)
    July 12th, 2010 at 11:04pm
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