Scream - Comments

Love it, I just subscribed. :D

I love it. Please write more soon =D
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I love this story! Can't wait for more:) Courtney confuses me though... haha she likes him, but she doesn't? Keep postinnngg!

Can't wait for more!....

you should so make it into a full story it is sooo good

I must say pretty good. Keep going. The nightmare, I wonder why all of a sudden she had it again. I look forward to the next. :}

yay! update! it's great that you've decided to carry it on - good job with the second chapter. can't wait for the next one!

i love it & i can't wait for more

The second chapters great!
I cant wait for more
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I've never read an incest story before, so this is definitely new. I almost exited out of the tab when I read it was an incest story. But hey, I ended up reading the two chapters and I like your story. I want to know what the "nightmare" is to the fullest extent. :D

i liked this!
keep it up,cause this story can really continue
hopefully you add another chapter

My loins tightened. To me it was a perfect story Synyster Gates and Incest. Thank you for making my dreams true.

Not bad, this could go somewhere if you continue.

I loved it
Brian does have younger half sister her name is McKenna

I loved it! yeah, you should make it a full story...

He does have a little sister actually. We'll, half sister. Or something lol.
But good story. Twisted. But good. Haha :)

This was really good! I think you should turn this into a full length story.
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You should really make this into a full length story...Its really good!
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yeah i reckon. it was sick with a lot of confusing emotions which made it really interesting. good job :)

You should make this into a story :)