Fairytale - Comments

Oh, this was honestly just adorable. The writing was just gorgeous; you have such a lovely, descriptive style. I found the emotion to be absolutely beautiful. It just poured from the screen into me, into my heart. I read it with a smile on my face, it just had a wonderful effect on me. Words fail me. The love between the two was so, so uplifting and just perfect. I am honestly envious.

The layout wasn't anything spectacular, but it didn't need to be; the words spoke well enough for themselves. I honestly barely noticed that it wasn't a fancy one with pretty graphics and such. I was completely focused on the story. The whole thing just drew you in and didn't let you go until the last sentence had been uttered. Fantastic job.

This was so cute. You captured the love between two people so well.

I loved the way you made no attempt to explain everything that was happening. The words just swept you along, leaving the reader with a lingering sense of mystery. It is never explicitly stated what language he was writing in and, until the end we don't even find out what the characters are called. I realise that people who knew the characters would have understood but even as an outsider I found the story fascinating.

The whole piece had a beautiful sense of whimsy and mystery that made it wonderful to read.

Oh my, this is brilliant. I love the description and the dialogue and it was adorable. Defiantly one of the best things I’ve read in a while.

THIS IS THE CUTEST THING EVEEEEEEEER <33333

i want dreams like this. this is so fucking adorable it's not even funny.
I love how Taka-chan sounds like... A god.
Amazing job, Takito. I could feel your the love through every corner.