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Author [xXxKiss_Of_DeathxXx]
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I loved it meg! I think you should expand on their story.
July 13th, 2010 at 11:39pm
in his kiss;
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I liked that seriousness when she wasn't waking up :) but then she did and they kissed and it was good :) i liked it, just work on the paragraph format and put a little bit more detail in it, that's all.
good job :)
July 13th, 2010 at 02:18pm
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