Mirror Dreams - Comments

yesh that was the new chapter! woot they finaly got round to reopening it so I put the next chapters up :]

Was Garden a new chapter? I came on to like re-read it, I started on umm where she meets the goat cause that's what I remembered though when she got to catty-pillow and the mushrooms i remembered them too. It was funny cause with the goat i thought 'he's like Donkey from Shrek' and then with the mushrooms i remembered when Alfie destroyed that giant mushroom....then i read the comments and I'd said both those things already :|
Anywho I don't remember garden I'm intrigued on who lives in this house and will ...'judge' her? haha.

haha. When I was measuring tree widths in the graveyard we found a reeely fat tree surrounded by loads of evil looking mushrooms

oooo interesting XD I remember once me, my brother and sister took Alfie to the UEA (university that my mum works at) cuz they have a park at the back, well lots of fields that people walk there dogs, and we found a massive mushroom, and said to Alfie 'get it!' and he just attacked it lol, he dug at it and everything, and we were like hope that wasn't some students like science experiment lol.

hahahahaha I'm sooooooooooo trying that porpoise thing on someone! That was classic! That goat is weird, kind of reminds me Donkey off Shrek when he goes after her when she tries to leave lol.

Sundance was allways weird...I'm still not sure if he's real or a figment of her immagination lol, and I'm the one writing it q:

I just remember seeing her grow, and it was on a trailer, because I didn't like alice in wonderland as it scared me :| so does wind in the willows, in fact your story does a bit haha but not as bad as if I could see it, just weird scary, like sometimes I wonder if Jodie is mad, and sundance is now kind of weird...SURREAL! thats the word im looking for! Everything seems surreal in ur story

no its alice that shrinks and grows. she drinks a suspicious bottle saying drink me and shrinks so she can fit through the rabbits door but she left the key on the table and couldnt reach it so she cried a pool of tears...then later eats a cake that says eat me and grows too big for the house she's in. its ages since i saw the disney cartoon, but i was recently reading my sisters illustrated kids book. and my mam has alice in wonderland and through the looking glass in one book that i read last year coz i dont think id read it before. i saw wind in the willows with the human actors and it scared me coz the weasles nearly turned them into dog meat...gave me nightmares :( as did jurasic park when i first saw that

haha i love this story it's well funny! Tweedle dee and tweedle dum! And when they broke and the chess pieces came, i shouted out straight away 'and all the kings horses and all the kings men couldn't put humpty back together again!' then i laughed haha. I've never seen alice in wonderland properly or wind in the willows, but all these things are still familiar haha. That would suck if everytime you drank you shrunk and everytime you ate you grew! Does Dorothy grow and shrink? as i said I never saw it properly..

its like lucy in narnia - she cries so much. i counted how many times she cries in the film, it was only like 9 times, i thought it would be way more....i was disapointed lol. but yea i think ive made her into a kinda wimpy depresive wet kid

hahaha u know u can stop her from crying? haha but i do get what u mean, Mystery bugs me sometimes cuz she's too moody at times, Andrea doesnt do enough haha, Sarry is gullible, i dont have a problem with delta...yet and umm sometimes Mr Lonston bugs me but im not sure why, but in general i like them all really they just bug me sometimes haha.

haha yea i would in my house! but that room is empty, apart from the reflections

Hmm very interesting, all ur stories r very different, amazing! I like it! :D yaay! *subscribes*

U write stories too well :P

btw if id ran thru a room with my eyes closed i would SO run into something :D just thought id share cuz thats what i thought at the time.

thanks, yea i shall try write some more tonight perhaps...in a few days at the most :]

Wow. Its.... amazing. I love it!! Any possibility of more? :lol:

thanks, im trying to write some more of it, i have the ending (As usual) i just need to get the rest out

Looks good so far. Very intriguing.