Time's Up Mary - Comments

Okay, sooo....
I have read this THREE times and it still gives me the chills.
I have two mirrors in my room!
continue! Its one of my favorites!(:
I love you, babes!

nikki,
you better start updating some other old stories! I miss them lol
loving this one. Can't wait to see what happens next!
love ya,
Tay Tay

Wow, i really enjoyed your story.
Please update soon

Oh Lordy, I love this! The entire concept really, I've never seen it done before in writing. I really think it's cool how you took something everyone knows and put it into a story. To be honest that sort of thing scares the bejeezus out of me (my friend did it and she cut herself but swore that she didn't do it) so I think that's why it's so intriguing. It's really suspenseful and I really like how it sort of drags me through the story.

The only thing is you tend to have a lot run-on senetences, more so the first chapter than anything. :)

I really like this. I used to call my brother Bubby when I couldn't say his name yet. So, that part of the story really struck a chord with me. I've had some experiences with the legend. But, most of all I love you amazing ability to paint a picture with your words. It's incredible how I can picture everything like I've been there before.
I subbed :]

Bloody Mary... I have a few experiences regarding that legend... This is great, really well written (: Can't wait for more (:

oh my lord! This is great.

Scary, but great ^_^ I love the summary, and I love chapter two

Okay, um, I hate you so much right now.
You're my bestfriend, and you know that giant mirror in my room?!
Yeah, for the first time in YEARS I've actually had to close it.
Why? Because of your new chapter!
It freaking gave me nightmares!
FYI, you need to text me as soon as you get home, if I'm asleep, spazz out my phone.
Its like major 911Drama alert.
Anyways, I love the story,
And you bestestfriend<3
Kbye(:

100% agree with the comment above :)

Lovely follow up chapter. You're setting the scene for what I think will be an absolutely fantastic story by the time it's finished. Update again soon?

Okay. I was a bit iffy when I saw your journal. But I really like what you have so far. This story has the potential to be amazing, and I plan on sticking around to see it finished. Update soon?

I love the summary. I've never read your type of writing style. I like it.

So far I like this. Intresting.
I'll subscribe.

:}

Even though what I've heard about Bloody Mary scares the living daylights out of me, I'm curious to see where this goes. (:

P.s. You have an interesting writing style. :D
I dig it, aha.

I love this. I seriously want to read the next chapter right about now haha.

Amazing start. Love it.

I love this so far.
I cannot wait for the rest of it :D

Aha, I really love the whole plot. It reminds me so much of when I was younger and we all took turns saying it in our school bathroom. :P

The summary was great, and I think I'm going to read more. :)

This sounds really, really interesting. I've always loved the whole Bloody Mary legends. I'm excited to see what you do.
<3

I don't know much about the story yet, but the summary made me want to read more.
I also read the character page, just to get more of the story out of it and I'm definitely going to read this.
<3