This is amazing for a 9 year old. Actually, it's pretty amazing anyway. I don't know why, but this story really got to me. It was so sad and depressing, but I loved it through and through.
I haven't heard that Pink song in FOREVER! lol You have a really cute layout, I like it.
She walked around. 1, 2, 3 bottles she counted out loud. Daddy yelled out in frustration as he picked up the gun. - Oh my gosh, that's so sad.
Oh my gosh, this is so sad. Depressing...Ah. But geez, you wrote this when you were 9? That's pretty good considering that his is perfectly written. I really liked it. :D
I love the layout it's beyound gorgoues and cute.