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  • Frank_Iero

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    this is sad, butttt i love it with a passion. i get excited whenever i see an update :D
    August 5th, 2010 at 02:45am
  • Annalia

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    I love this story.

    And I read your one-shot. It has good descriptions and I kind of like it, but I don't really like tragedies, so the ending sucks for me.
    August 5th, 2010 at 02:37am
  • always infinite

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    So, what's up with Gerard? Did Gerard get it already, or is it something else?
    xoxo.
    August 2nd, 2010 at 02:37pm
  • CoolWhip48

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    With every update of this story, I fall deeper in love! ^_^

    This is amazing and I'm suddenly curious as to why Gerard was being so kind; not that he was a jerk or anything, but he's being nicer than usual...Hmm. XD And I can't help but to feel sorry for Frankie; I want him to be okay...

    Awesome story and I do hope that you can update again really soon! :P
    August 2nd, 2010 at 08:24am
  • In the closet

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    I love this story. Poor Frank... and I think Gerard figured it out already.
    Please update more...!
    August 2nd, 2010 at 03:55am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    Gee totally knows
    August 2nd, 2010 at 03:09am
  • Annalia

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    Cute :)
    I'm glad you have more chapters done!
    August 2nd, 2010 at 01:44am
  • iceyblues

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    I really like this :) please update soon! :D xo
    August 2nd, 2010 at 12:57am
  • crazy.beautiful

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    i'm glad i gave this a shot...it's different, a good different.

    i like frank's character in this one, for some odd reason i'm drawn to him, not out of pity but just something.

    i've noticed a few mishaps here and there, mostly wording, but even with those, you're doing a great job. can't wait for more! :)
    August 2nd, 2010 at 12:35am
  • Frank_Iero

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    great update, and get well soon :)
    August 1st, 2010 at 08:32pm
  • Frank Lero

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    Ohh man, I wish you would update more frequently! I love this story!
    August 1st, 2010 at 11:03am
  • Annalia

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    Awww, Gerard has a crush on him I think lol.
    August 1st, 2010 at 03:28am
  • always infinite

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    I love this. <3
    You could never update too fast. I get happy when I see a gazillion updates in my inbox. :D
    xoxo.
    July 26th, 2010 at 11:52pm
  • Just.a.Kid

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    How can you update too often? The more updates, the better! =]
    update soon? 0=D
    July 25th, 2010 at 10:12pm
  • EvilBunny

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    Whos complaining about fast updates? It is a good story though. You do get a few where Frank ends up homeless but it is a nice change to see it from his point of view and is much much better than the other ones I have read. Update soon ;).
    July 25th, 2010 at 01:55pm
  • Lithium Lullabies

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    Oh my goodness. I loved this chapter, because it told more about Frank's personality than what he's going through. I love how it showed how Frankie got a few hours of bliss before he had to start worrying again.

    The store manager sounds cool, though. I mean, i think that there should be a mild romance between them... Y'know, so its not JUST Gerard and Frank, add a little drama into the mix. I mean, not saying that him and the store manager should be in love or anything, but a little chemistry would be nice...
    But i'm not telling you how to write this story. I mean i dont know what direction you plan on taking it, so just ignore that bit of advice. Its a terrible idea.

    Anywho, i'm glad you update so often-- it makes me happy.
    July 25th, 2010 at 05:18am
  • Annalia

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    I like it :P
    July 25th, 2010 at 04:37am
  • CoolWhip48

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    Keep up the updating often! That is an amazing disease; considering the fact that your stories; especially this one for me personally, are super awesome! I do hope Frankie will be able to buy that guitar, but it's sweet the shopkeeper lets him play her...

    Gosh, this is so amazing; I find myself reading over the chapters more than once while I'm waiting for updates! And that's seriously the truth! XD

    Great job and I hope to see another awesome chapter soon! ^_^
    July 25th, 2010 at 02:10am
  • Lexington.

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    Updating often is not bad. I love when you update because I love your stories. Like this one and your other.
    July 25th, 2010 at 01:51am
  • Frank_Iero

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    i feel so freaking bad for Frank. its so sad. poor kid :(
    July 25th, 2010 at 12:40am