I love this story so much. I adore that Brian has taken Frank in. It's such a complex story with amazing characters... I'm so sad you seem to be gone! Please come back soon, whenever you can :)
awwwww poor Frank , and Brian's so worried and i think Frank should just tell Brian the truth and wth is going on with Gerard? i wanna know what Ray was talking about and also why is Mikey being so distant? so many questions so few answers
I sort of like that Brian got angry, it means he cares enough to get emotional, and that's just what Frank needs right now. Although Frank's fear was unexpected, did he fear telling the truth? Because the truth would have made that situation better, or maybe just a little bit of it, to help clear things up. What Frank did was noble, he should be proud to wear those scares.
You need to update this soon! It's amazing, seriously. And are you Danish? 'Cause I think one of the Author's Notes said something about stuff on the news in Denmark? If you are that's awesome - My dad's Danish xD
Ah! Ray just wanted to know, to understand, and you're defensiveness Frankie is not helping anybody, then again, he has reasons not to tell. I felt like Frank was all over the place in this chapter, completely thrown, a mess, the beating took more out of him then first thought.
So Ray has seen Gerard defending himself or what? Did Gerard lie to Frank before? Did Frank obtain an unnecessary beating? Oh! The questions!
Oh Frank! Such a noble thing, to take such a beating for Gerard, but pretty stupid too, your reasoning is saddening, thinking you need to save Gerard like this, poor thing, I don't want to see Frank get hurt like this for no reason, I want Gerard to realise what Frank's putting himself through to protect him and I want him to be eternally grateful. But... Woo Ray to the rescue! Did he scare the guys off or what? He is a bit if a hulking mass of grr but really he's such a sweetheart.
It was short sweet and just a little bit confusing...i didnt really get it. Is there a part two to this?
as always I'll always love this story, you and I both know that. So if you could update again real soon and clear up my confusion that would be ever so great.
I don't really understand the situation now :/ and it was kinda scary - I didn't know what was happening and because of it the beating came out as something even more cruel (am I making sense...?) anyway it wasn't connected or am I missing something?
poor Frank, being so torn about how he's seen, its not fair at all that he's on that situation, but to feel guilty for burdening people is even worse. Brian should know how grateful Frank is, he shouldn't need a Christmas present to prove this. I'm sure I've told you time and time again, but I adore being in Franks head, his character is amazing and I even love these thinking chapters because all of it helps shape him into something so believable and easy to relate and sympathise with.
And I swear I was wondering when you were going to update it yesterday! :D Oh yeah, Frank seriously needs to get himself together... Because even if he's grateful he fails at showing it and his school friends put him aside or he does, but now he's just a bit ungrateful on the outside to me :/